User talk:Rsscience/sandbox

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Nice start on your draft. I noticed that you moved some of your work to mainspace already, so hopefully I'm not missing any changes that you made when you moved things live.


 * Your references are currently in the "References" section - they should be placed in the body of the article instead.
 * Avoid statements like this, especially if they are unsourced

Whether something is "important to note" is an opinion. It can't be stated as a simple, obvious fact. Instead, you should attribute this opinion (and include a source).
 * Only proper nouns should be capitalized. Multiple sclerosis, for example, isn't a proper noun. Neither is posterior cord syndrome.
 * The "Etiology and symptoms" section is too dense to read easily. You should break that up into more than one paragraph.
 * Section headers use sentence capitalization, not title capitalization; only the first word of the title, and proper nouns, should be capitalized. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:06, 6 April 2018 (UTC)