User talk:Rumrunner3210/Water

I have reviewed your article, good job! You had a great number of sources and a lot of them are which can be deemed reliable. Love the figure introduced in the article. Properly conveys the message of some of the water issues. For some next steps however, I would look forward to putting more of a properly organized contribution, in the sense that additional sub-headings should be added to the topics discussed and not have an overwhelming display of numerous smaller paragraphs in one section. Also, one of the references that is referred in the sources, should be removed and replaced with a source other than a news source present. In addition, looking at the overall outlook of the article, user should supplement an outlook of both positive and negative perspectives about the topic. Additionally, I feel like the user should include additional details when stating some examples of crisis's or events. Other than that, I think the user did a good job on the article contribution.