User talk:Runcoachjason

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Karp (April 9)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 22:08, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

The draft particle that you created

 * My first impression on starting to read the draft was that it read like an attempt to impress the the reader with Jason Karp's wonderful achievement record. A Wikipedia article must be written from a neutral point of view, and promotional material that might be perfectly suitable for a CV or résumé is not acceptable here.
 * Looking at the references, I found that none of them is coverage of Jason Karp by an independent source, which is what is needed. Material written by him which is not about him does not achieve either of the two purposes of Wikipedia references, namely to show that there he has been subject to sufficient independent coverage to establish notability, and to enable verification of article content about him.
 * From your user name it seems that you are probably Jason Karp. If so you should be aware that Wikipedia's guidelines on autobiographies and conflcit of interest strongly discourage you from writing about yourself.
 * It is almost never suitable to copy content from another web site to Wikipedia, for more than one reason, the most important being copyright. When you post anything to Wikipedia you release it for anyone in the world to reuse it, either unchanged or modified in any way whatever, subject to attribution to Wikipedia. It is very rare that the owner of a web site licenses content for such very free reuse, and in those few occasions when they do so, we require proof of the fact. We don't assume that content is freely licensed on the unsubstantiated say so of just anyone who comes along and creates a Wikipedia account. Certainly Amazon's terms of use do not permit the kind of open reuse that is required for publication on Wikipedia. For that reason, the page will have to be deleted. JBW (talk) 22:23, 9 April 2020 (UTC)