User talk:Rupertgm

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 14:30, 7 February 2013 (UTC)

Rejected page
Hello Excirial,

I've had my article rejected twice now because it "sounds too much like an advertisement". I don't know how to change this - it has 10 references to reputable news articles and stand-alone reference points that clearly indicate it is of notable interest. It also follows the format of other articles on companies, so I don't know why this submission has been rejected again.

Here is the link: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Bellcom_Worldwide

Any guidance would be much appreciated. Kind regards, Euan


 * Hello there Euan,


 * Before anything else - if you are modelling your own article after another page it is often a good idea to select one from the good article list (Specific for businesses: Category "economics and businesses".) These article's have been checked for quality and deemed to be of good quality. Other random article's detailing companies might have issues, so you could end up modeling yours after a bad example.


 * As for the issues itself, let me quote a few examples:
 * Varry's leadership style has been publicly recognised  (Yes it is cited. But what encyclopedic value does this add to the article detailing a company? This is a line i would expect to find in a cover letter)
 * As Managing Director of Bellcom Worldwide, Varry has been the driving force in transforming the business and leading it into being a boutique sales organisation. (Same as above - more personal promotion.)
 * With specialised knowledge and experience within the international call centre sector, they offer a fully intergrated outsourcing call centre service and a highly skilled mulitlingual workforce' (This line is riddled with peacock wording. It is a call center - the rest are judgments on quality)
 * "Clients section". Don't include one. Unless there is a specific encyclopedic reason to write about a partnership or client relation due to some important event these sections boil down to portfolio's or advertising ("We are a supplier to these large companies, and since were chosen to supply them we must be exceptional".


 * Kind regards, Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 19:00, 8 February 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Tito Dutta (contact) 08:39, 16 March 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bellcom Worldwide concern
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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bellcom Worldwide


Hello Rupertgm. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Bellcom Worldwide".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 18:00, 15 January 2014 (UTC)