User talk:Russovidal/sandbox

Your page is amazing. I am sincerely impressed by how well you grasp Wikipedia editing and formatting, not to mention how you structure your information and its accuracy as well. At first glance seeing the wall of information was daunting, but further reading proved you summarized the information in each of the four sources you chose impeccably. I do not have any recommendations necessarily, however maybe adding subheadings or bolding certain bits of information might help with the visual aspect of the article. Overall I'd say this is almost identical to an official published Wikipedia article, can't wait to see what else you will add to it. Ljm186 (talk) 19:11, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

I added Ljm186's comment. t.williams (talk) 16:01, 1 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Hello Thank you for the kind feedback and advice about subheadings. I will be sure to keep headings and typeface in mind when drafting the article into the sandbox. On a side note, that was a great idea to create a heading for peer feedback on your page- I might have to incorporate that element here. Thank you again.  Russovidal (talk) 02:55, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Reviews[edit] Mohammad: Great work so far, you seem to be a seasoned user of Wikipedia and have already made some very impressive contributions to a few articles. It seems that your group maybe using your sandbox for your team project so it's great to see a lot of activity here. Just keep in mind organization and structure for setting up your sandbox to better navigate through your assignments, although I'm sure your final contributes will be much more polished. keep up the good work! Mobalatero (talk) 16:53, 6 March 2018 (UTC) t.williams (talk) 18:24, 6 March 2018 (UTC)