User talk:Rvernon18

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Hello, Rvernon18, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi! Here is my peer review for our class. Wow, what a thorough article! There is so much good information here. The organization is overall great, and nothing distracted me. I think that there could be some more added to the education portion of the article, but that was the only thing that stood out to me immediately. The viewpoints seem to be equally represented, and it does not seem to be a biased article. The citations all work. The sources furthermore seem reliable and up to date. The only other thing I would say is maybe to remove some of the direct quotes. That is more of a personal preference, but I think things are more convincing when not direct quotes but come from a variety of sources. I hope this was helpful! Juliakalei (talk) 02:18, 3 March 2020 (UTC) Julia