User talk:Rvillap/sandbox

Gabriel's Peer Edits
I think the information you present is great but you can organize it a bit clearer. I would break it into three sections and have them be overview, carbon trading, and barriers to transition. The carbon trading aspect seems like a huge proponent of eco-capitalism and you should highlight this more and maybe provide some statistics or examples. I think it would flow a lot better if you broke it down like this. I would also elaborate on the barriers to entry and maybe provide insight on the best ways to break in.

Overall, good information and clear explanations.