User talk:Ryan Whritenour/sandbox

Ryan's peer review. The introduction of the article is very brief and to the point. It is not dragged too much or boring. The article it self though is a small one and does not contains a whole lot of information about the topic. Ryan if you can expand it and put more reliable information in it, it will make this article more helpful for people seeking information about this topic. The source where the information is coming from is very reliable but the sources are certainly not enough. More sources should be added to the article to make it neutral and to add more thoughts. All sections of the article are well organized but more sections needed to be added. The article is heavily based on information and does not try to convince towards a certain view point.