User talk:Ryananstett/Slow Fade (2011)

Requested move
User:Ryananstett/Slow Fade (2011) → Slow Fade (movie) – I created the article under my page to make sure that it was formatted correctly. I believe it is now ready to be published. Thanks for your assistance. Ryananstett (talk) 04:51, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

I'm afraid I don't feel it's quite ready. The Plot summary and Production and marketing sections both read like promotion for the film. Under Cast there's a reference to Fireproof which I think is in error, and the grammar of the Release section is faulty. But the main thing is the tone of the plot, production and marketing sections. Andrewa (talk) 04:07, 6 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Request Removed. Thank you for your contributions. Unfortunately, creating new articles is beyond the scope of the Requested moves process. Please submit your request to Articles for Creation. You can do so by adding to the top of the article. Feel free to contact me on my talk page with any questions. Happy editing. Cliff (talk) 20:56, 13 October 2011 (UTC)