User talk:Ryanhan2/sandbox

Review #1 Hi, The only suggestion I have is for your 'Hazards' Section pertaining to the use of 'one' or 'victim'. Perhaps instead of saying "If one was to spill this compound and get it in their eyes, they would need to immediately flush out the eye or eyes with water for about 15 minutes."you could say:If this compound gets into the eye, the eyes should be flushed out with water for 15 minutes. or If the eye comes in contact with this chemical,it should be immediately flushed out with water for 15 minutes,... happy finishing your page

Group7 reactorgo (talk) 18:13, 29 October 2012 (UTC)

Review #2 I think you need to look at the other names you listed for the compound. I don't believe another name for this compound would be 1-propene.

Tmcgreg2 (talk) 05:45, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #3 You are doing a pretty good job here. The overall page is well organized and chembox is really detailed. However, I think it would be better if you include more sections about your compound, like history and production. Also, I suggest you to expand each section you have now. For example, in the "Uses" section, you can elaborate on how allylcyclopentane is used in pharmaceuticals, and probably include some related chemical reactions in synthesis and working mechanisms. Plus, you could include more pictures that make your page look more interesting, like a ball and stick model in your chembox, and probably more pictures related to its uses. Keep up the good work!

Li180 (talk) 20:15, 2 November 2012 (UTC)