User talk:Ryankirzner22/Gay-for-pay

Hi! I noticed there isn't a draft up yet for an extensive peer review, but I'll list out my own observations and maybe you can take them into consideration as you make any edits

In the lead section, it ends with quotations of two different scholars, I do not think this is the most appropriate location to add that content. The lead is supposed to give a brief overview of the subject, this could be added in a more in-depth subsection.

The film and television section focuses really on the concept of pinkface maybe there should be a separate section for that as well, but I am not too sure. I feel like this section does not provide good insight on gay-for-pay in different types of media it might be prevalent in film and television but there is aspect of sex work that I feel is heavily unaddressed.

History of gay-for-pay, the lead talks about a bit of the history within the gay rights movement, I think it would be beneficial to add a section maybe at the upper body of the article talking about the older occurrences of this phenomenon.

Overall, the sex worker and pornography sections need to be expanded on, its a very surface level description with no concrete examples. I think this is what the article lacks aside from reliable information is the need for specific examples.

These are a couple of things I briefly observed, feel free to reach out to ask me about any questions. Additionally, if you ever want me to review your work I'd be more than happy to! Just reach out to me! --Ncarril4 (talk) 20:14, 25 February 2022 (UTC)