User talk:Ryanliou

Peer review feedback
Hi Ryan,

Great job on your draft! I really like the structure you've outlined in your plan and your draft was clear and easy to understand. Here are just a few very minor areas of improvement I think can be implemented: 1. "Development in Democratic Politics" Section: - In my opinion "Development in Democratic Politics" is a bit of a misleading title. I think the section provides context on the current system and reasons for why quadratic voting can amend these issues rather than focusing on the development aspect. - The middle part about majorities is slightly repetitive. For instance, "Since the majority has a higher chance of winning, it isn't fair for the minorities", can probably be removed as this idea has already been conveying. In addition, majority/minority is not only limited to racial aspects so I would suggest taking out this part "In the United States, the stable majority has historically been white people while minorities have been people of color" too. 2. "Taiwan" Section: - Maybe provide a little more context on the RadicalxChange Hackathon. It's a little unclear what the purpose of the project was and the impact it had.

H.Susanna (talk) 07:11, 13 October 2020 (UTC)

Hey, it's Susanna.

H.Susanna (talk) 05:03, 1 September 2020 (UTC)Susanna Huang

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