User talk:Ryguy4723/sandbox

Kyle's Peer Review
First off, you have lots of good info. Some things you could do to enhance the article are to clean up the grammatical mistakes, as well as chopping up the paragraph a bit. The paragraph is quite large, and would be easier to read if it was split up, possibly into sub-headings. You can split it up into subheadings titled, "presidents of the arboretum", "renovation projects", and other topics you include in your paragraph. As stated earlier, you have a lot of good information on the history of the Morton Arboretum, and you can perfect it by organizing the info in a easier to read manner. Nice work!