User talk:Rylienicolee/sandbox

Rylienicolee's Peer Review from User:AnthonyLudwar
The edit by Rylienicolee I am reviewing is on the Byzantine architecture wiki page. The first comment I have is she should add her contributions to her sandbox in wiki. the contributions she made to the wiki page is the section "Important Byzantine Monuments" with sub sections: Hagia Irene, Construction, History of Hagia Irene, Hagia Sophia, Construction of Hagia Sophia. This is a very large contribution to the page. The sections are written well and in the formal wiki format, though it could use more article references. Like "Hagia Sophia was destroyed and rebuilt twice." and insert reference instead of having just one at the end of each paragraph. I've noticed on other pages whenever a fact is stated it is immediately referenced, even if the same article is referenced multiple times within the same paragraph. Another concern I have with the contribution I had was relevant information/deletion. I think what's written is great but it might be out of place. It reads like its on the Hagia Irene or Hagia Sophia page but its on the Byzantine architecture page. What might happen is it will get deleted and turned into a list/table of Important Byzantine Monuments that link to such monuments that area have a page with the history,construction,etc. Other than that the writing and format was good it just might be out place and more reference indentation is needed. Side Note: After looking at the Hagia Irene page I think your contributions could help that page out.