User talk:Ryoma Masutani/Water privatization

For the "Prevalence of public-private partnerships" section, I noticed this chunk of text seems off to me: "A World Bank report lists the following examples of successful public-private partnerships in developing countries: the full privatization in Chile; the mixed companies in Colombia; the concessions in Guayaquil in Ecuador, Brazil, Argentina, Eastern Manila in the Philippines, Morocco, and Gabun; and the lease contracts in Côte d'Ivoire, Senegal, and Yerevan in Armenia.[1]"

I want to change it to the following: "A World Bank report lists the following examples of successful public-private partnerships in developing countries: the full privatization in Chile, the mixed companies in Colombia, the concessions in Guayaquil in Ecuador, Brazil, Argentina, Eastern Manila in the Philippines, Morocco, and Gabun, and the lease contracts in Côte d'Ivoire, Senegal, and Yerevan in Armenia.[1]" The semicolons in the original text are misused because they are not used to join independent clauses. Ochung (talk) 19:46, 27 November 2020 (UTC)