User talk:Rytsao/sandbox

Peer Review
Peer review will be communicated through your Talk page. If needed, review the Peer Review training module and the link included in today's email. Thank you! Ann--Annpharris (talk) 21:59, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

For this sentence, I recommend a semi-colon (after breakfast): Observed hyperglycemia secondary to the Dawn Phenomenon is often defined as a increase in blood glucose of at least > 20mg/dL between the lowest level at night and highest level before breakfast, however, actual ranges may vary.[3][6] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xanthochromia (talk • contribs) 18:57, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall, well written article. I think in the beginning I would suggest saying this is an observation in healthy and diabetic patients, but emphasize that this is more dramatic in diabetic patients and thus clinically relevant (unless I am wrong about this). Will reread once the article is completed.

-Matt — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xanthochromia (talk • contribs) 19:00, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review- Nabeel Mallick
Hello Ray, good article There is some advanced terminology like peri-arrest that might be too advanced for non-medical people but overall it looks great — Preceding unsigned comment added by MallickN (talk • contribs) 14:20, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

Liver Scratch Test
Hi Ray - great job on this article! It begins solidly and the technique is explained well. Keep up the good work! Annpharris (talk) 18:49, 26 April 2020 (UTC)Ann