User talk:Ryukiri 1/sandbox

Talk: Peer Review I think you did very well at giving a lot of interesting statistical information about the increase of infertility in men. However, you should also give multiple reasons or theories as to why. You wrote one possible reason of temperature fluctuations, but I'm sure there are other crucial reasons as well. It would paint a more complete picture for the reader. (That part may just be for your other group mates). Other than that you probably gonna do just fine.

I don't know if I'm supposed to peer review you, but better safe than sorry! My draft is on my sandbox if you get a chance to look at it.

Student1040 (talk) 10:41, 21 November 2018 (PST)

Thank you!! And yeah, you were supposed to peer review me :) but I am not your peer reviewer. Good luck!Ryukiri 1 (talk) 19:29, 25 November 2018 (UTC)