User talk:S-Kay Kin/sandbox

Mudman’s Peer Review First suggestion is that a brief background on the writer, Leonne Ross could have helped the article with an introduction.

Opening with the gender analysis reference was as a brilliant idea. However, speaking about or making references about two different stories will be confusing even if the themes are similar.

The short story mudman from Come Let Us Sing Anyway themes were briefly explained with the use of references or quotes from the piece but clearly stating each theme and diving deeper into each with further explanation would have been another plus for the sandbox article.

The last section about Love Letters again, the reference is okay but focus on the selected article which is the mudman.--Suchhmann (talk) 03:59, 28 March 2022 (UTC)Suchhmann


 * Thanks for the feedback. S-Kay Kin (talk) 07:00, 5 April 2022 (UTC)