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Hey!

Great start! I'm actually really excited about this piece because it could essentially be used in the article I'm working on! (African Feminism)

Since its the first draft, the only thing that I would only advise to consider is how there's so many long African names in a matter of a couple of sentences. As a first time reader, I was personally thrown off a bit from focusing on the main content (again, even though it's only the first draft haha)

Good outline! Clearly states what you will be talking about!

Have a good weekend!

Mauricio

Hi Mauricio,

Thank you for the feedback! I will definitely make those necessary changes.

Best, Samia S.sherif (talk) 19:36, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

Maddy's Peer Review
Hey, so I think breaking up the bibliography into smaller sections is a really good idea. It was a very dense single section article and this is a good start! Just finish the beginning of the second paragraph & I think this is really solid. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mtovsen (talk • contribs) 00:45, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

Hi Maddy,

Thank you for the feedback! Yes, I will finish up the second and remaining paragraphs hopefully this week.

Best, Samia S.sherif (talk) 19:36, 16 April 2019 (UTC)