User talk:SPLL/Yiddish/Brian redmond jr Peer Review

The origins of Yiddish is direct with geographical locations which is good. My advice for this section is to add more like maybe if the language is mixed with other languages, what culture use the language, is it a live language or dead one, etc. The Alphabet and Spelling section is well detailed on how the language works. My advice for this section is to add examples as to how the language works, maybe a IPA chart, maybe rules of the language, and more information of the phonology. Other than that the article is well made and has a good chunk of information that is useful to the audience!

in regards to peer review
Hello Briand redmond jr, thank you for your feedback. I think we could have provided more examples to help people better understand the article and I do think we could have talked a bit more about language mixing. I appreciate you for providing your opinions and giving us advice, thank you. SPLL (talk) 19:38, 3 December 2022 (UTC)