User talk:SRampersaud/Interview

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer: Aisha Hamid

Date of review: 4/25/13

Date of review:04/25/13

Name of Editor: S.Rampersaud

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Interview

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page:04/25/13

Date review submitted to instructor: 04/25/13

Length of edit (too long/too short): Length of edit exceeds requirement.

Image (needed/appropriate): No image in edit. Image would have been appropriate. Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Information is accurate, from the textbook. Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)-N/A Wikiformatting: Formatting is good. Bullet points enhance the text. Grammar & composition: Grammar and composition is accurate, no errors. Other comments:	 Well done!

(Aisha Hamid (talk) 23:51, 25 April 2013 (UTC))

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer: Aaleksanian

Date of review: 4/13/13

Date of review:04/17/13

Name of Editor: S.Rampersaud

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Interview

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page:04/17/13

Date review submitted to instructor: 04/17/13

Length of edit (too long/too short): Exceeds the requirement

Image (needed/appropriate): Picture might be available to find Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Accurate to textbook information Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)-N/A Wikiformatting: Fine formatting Grammar & composition: Proper construction of edit material Other comments:	 Well done job. Heading might be too bright for the main article. Aaleksanian (talk) 15:10, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
Name of student reviewer: F.Moshammad

Date of review 4/15/13

Date of review:04/24/13

Name of Editor: SRampersaud

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page:04/15/13

Date review submitted to instructor: 04/24/13

Length of edit (too long/too short): The length of edit exceeds the requirement

Image (needed/appropriate): an image would be a good addition to this edit.

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Accurate to textbook information

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)-N/A

Wikiformatting: The formatting is very good

Grammar & composition: Proper construction of edit

Other comments: Good job!

F.Moshammad (talk) 01:07, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer:Hmehta0120

Date of review	 4/24/2013

Name of editor: S. Rampersaud

URL of editor’s Userpage	 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Interview

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 4/24/2013

Date review submitted to instructor: 4/24/2013

Length of edit (too long/too short): The length of the edit is excellent. You have provided enough information without overpowering the readers. Image (needed/appropriate):N/A (See comments, in comment box) Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit):You have provided accurate information from the textbook, along with citing it. Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): N/A Wikiformatting:	Excellent formatting, used bullet points, and italics the examples you have discussed (I would say make them bold as well, just an option will make them stand out more and more creative points) Grammar & composition: Did Not find any errors. Their a flow to the reading well put together

Other comments: As stated earlier if you make the examples bold would look great. Also if you could find images or an image to show interviewer judgment it will add more charter to the page and more creative point. Other than that looks great. Good Luck Hmehta0120 (talk) 04:00, 25 April 2013 (UTC)