User talk:STohme

Introductory post!
Hello STohme, I'm a freshman at Rice who hopes to major in Ecology and Evolutionary Biology and minor in Poverty, Justice, and Human Capabilities. I'm mostly interested in human development especially within the indigenous South Asian population regarding access to health and education, as well as environmental justice. It's really cool that you plan to combine your medical studies with PJHC and look at development from the health perspective! I look forward to looking at your contributions! Adakay (talk) 03:13, 15 September 2017 (UTC)

HIV/AIDS in Lesotho
Hi! Nice work on fleshing out your article. My biggest suggestion for final improvements would be to add some information that puts the topic into a broader context... in particular, what's the relationship to HIV/AIDS in South Africa and other nearby countries (beyond just high rates, as illustrated by the map). I think it would also be improved by being more careful about attributions of causality; you're dealing with a lot of sociological and economic arguments around social/cultural factors which often make sense don't necessarily reflect a consensus beyond the individual scholars who write about that particular factor, so being explicit about according to whom within the text (and not just indirectly via footnotes) would make for a stronger article.--Sage (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:56, 28 November 2017 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, STohme, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 07:21, 7 February 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Refugees of the Syrian Civil War in Lebanon has been accepted
 Refugees of the Syrian Civil War in Lebanon, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Cheers Mgbo120  20:01, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
 * If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask at the  [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_talk/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Refugees_of_the_Syrian_Civil_War_in_Lebanon help desk] .
 * If you would like to help us improve this process, please consider.

Copyright problem on Refugees of the Syrian Civil War in Lebanon
One of your additions to the a\bove article include passages copied nearly verbatim from https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/pdf/10.1080/13642987.2017.1371140, which is a non-free source. This was detected by automatic plagiarism detection software. For copyright reasons, one contribution was deleted. Please review the Plagiarism and Copyright training module before proceeding further. Thanks. — Diannaa 🍁 (talk) 19:55, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

Hi Diannaa, thank you for your note! I have corrected the oversight and rewritten this section of the article. STohme (talk) 20:31, 13 April 2019 (UTC)