User talk:SUNY5589/Lactotropic cell

Peer Review
Peer Review:

By Sukhpreet Kaur

1. I like the way you covered all the basic concepts of lactotrophic cells in this article, along with information on their regulation, function, and related disorders including prolactinoma.

2. I liked to see the citations from reliable organizations like the Mayo Clinic and medical publications.

3. I really liked the way you used clear and straightforward language, which will help readers for better understanding.

4. I think a more thorough examination of the role of lactotrophic cells will improve the article. Further information on the synthesis and release of prolactin, as well as the precise functions of dopamine, TRH, and estrogen in controlling lactotrophic cell activity, could enhance the understanding of the subject.

5. I think it's important to understand the effects of hormones like estrogen, dopamine, and TRH on lactotrophic cells. You may provide better understanding of hormonal control by explaining the methods by which these hormones interact with lactotrophic cells to regulate prolactin synthesis.

6. I think more information could be stated about the clinical consequences of dysfunctional lactotrophic cells, especially in the context of prolactinoma. It will help people interested in the clinical aspect of lactotrophic cells, knowing about the long-term diagnosis, treatment, and management of prolactinoma.

7. I've noticed that the article occasionally uses multiple names for lactotrophic cells. This could be confusing for readers. believe that if we all used the same term, everything would be more understandable and straightforward. Shunumunu (talk) 19:57, 21 April 2024 (UTC)

Peer review by Kari Flora:

You did a great job expanding this article. From what I can see on the article page, it was rather sparse but you have added a lot of good information! I really like that you added a picture. That helped to give a visual of the cells and make the article more enticing. Some minor edits I would suggest:

-The first sentence of "Function" I believe should say "allowing for" rather than "allows for."

-There seems to be a few areas with information that could use citations (specifically noticed in the "Conditions" section).

-I also agree with the reviewer above that you should try to stick to one cell name throughout the article. It is great that you list all of the alternative names at the beginning of the article but for consistency it may be better to only refer to them as "Lactotropic cells" throughout your writing.

-If you are able to find information on the structure and synthesis of lactotropic cells that could be another interesting section.

Overall I think that you have really improved this article! Fairbanks24 (talk) 15:13, 25 April 2024 (UTC)