User talk:SWB327/Hiroji Kiyotake

This is a VERY impressive amount of contributions, kudos!

- Under the Education heading, the info of his alma alter and his involvement in sports needs a source!

- Under the Metroid heading, the formatting of the last sentence feels like an accident. That can just be added on to the sentence before it to say, "Hiroji and Yoshio Sakamoto and the rest of the team decided that at the end of Metroid to reveal that Samus was a female character, making Samus Aran one of the first female protaganist in a video game. [3]

Kcolorado (talk) 00:53, 19 March 2021 (UTC) Kcolorado
 * Kcolorado Thank you! SWB327 (talk) 21:58, 19 March 2021 (UTC)