User talk:Sa18ma/sandbox

Peer Review

Every sentence is supported by a reliable source/citation. There were a few areas of missing commas, and the introduction sentences seemed a little informal. Besides that, all sentences are very clear in explaining specific examples supported by credible sources of how music is incorporated in advertisements. The introduction includes a subjective opinion. It claims that "eery music comes on, it will make the moment more scary". This could be made objective by not using the words "eery" or "scary", and by describing how exactly certain music instills fear in viewers. Again, the sentence "eery music...makes the moment more scary", while not intentionally an opinion, could be better worded by instead describing, informationally, how music evokes emotion in listeners. Yes, total words add up to 252 along with a total of 5 sources.

Anusrigunde (talk) 03:42, 29 March 2019 (UTC)Anusrigunde