User talk:Saadk07/sandbox

draft comments
I was taking a look at the draft you've made and I have a few comments: If you have any questions about these comments, let me know with the ping template or go to my talk page. Thanks. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:28, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
 * I think you have sandbox. on your page, not something like Userspace draft.
 * The list of exhibitors could be reframed as prose, including the notable/central exhibitors.
 * Generally citations in the first section (the lead) should only be for very contentious or important claims, otherwise it is a summary of the article contents and so the things mentioned in it should be sourced elsewhere.
 * Is there a reason why we focus so much on the 2014 expo?