User talk:Saboifaire/sandbox

Sabrina – Overall I thought you did a great job describing the role of a Collections Manager. Your bulleted list is easy to follow and accurately describes some of the tasks one might often encounter in this line of work. I also thought that it was beneficial to include information about the role of a Registrar and how that position often over laps with a Collections Manager based on the size of the museum. One thing I would have liked to seen or at least seen a direct link to was the “best practices” guidelines you reference. Although I am aware of what the guidelines are someone not familiar with this subject might have questioned what constituted as best practice. – Ana.

Sabrina - There's a lot to cover on a collections manager article! Your articles displays a good, concise description of this collections role. I definitely think the content is on point, especially the commentary on working within AAM best practices. However, I think your structure for the Wikipedia format could use some work. Breaking up the info you have into a more structured format (with a lead and titled sections as shown in Manual of Style/Layout) would make the article more organized as well as allowing for future growth of the article. You also had lots of good outside resource websites listed, which link to a lot more relevant information. But I think your article could use some more in-text citations, as I only counted two. For instance, the part where you link the phrase "stewards over collections" to the outside AAM website - I think that should be a citation rather than hyperlink. Just a small nitpick - good article overall! Chels talks (talk) 16:59, 3 March 2016 (UTC)