User talk:SabrinaR/sandbox

Hi,

I just wanted to review what you have been writing for your article. It looks like you have a great article coming along. Having done one of these assignments in the past the largest or most significant recommendation that I can give you would be to ensure that you are planning your article before writing. For example, my last prof had us use a blank piece of paper and plan the various sections we were looking to write on. So if you are looking at writing on Volunteer Data you may want to include some of the benefits and risks that come along with doing this. Make sure that you start your article with a strong and clear definition of your concept before you dive into more information. Which you have already started and is good. It's great to see that you are also hyperlinking other relevant articles to term used in your atile. This will definietly help people who may come across difficult to understand terms. It looks like you have a good list of references to start your article as well. This is really important since those references will help determine what you can write about. Without references Wikipedia may remove portions of your article so really important to ensure that you save your work into a Word document as well so you have something to have as a backup. I also saw that you were looking to write about transactions, which is something that I will also be writing on in my article for dataveillance. If you find need any information about the sharing between transactions let me know and I can send you what I have researched and discovered along the way. I think looking up an artile on dataveillance may help you understand who data is volunteered through transactions and what happens with that data once it has been volunteered. Hope everything goes well with the assignment. Best of luck.