User talk:Sabrina Milk

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Hello, Sabrina Milk, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review 1
I really like your article, your chosen writer and her works sound really interesting.

I noticed that a few places might need some citations, including where you discuss her graduations from The French Protestant College in 1978, when she worked as first assistant director to other filmmakers, as well as the awards Stephan has won. I think references would also be needed under the "The Three Disappearances of Soad Hosni" subsection of your article, where you discuss real life events that have occurred and also for the final filmography that you have provided. I'd say that generally you should add as many references as you think you might need just to be safe.

I think that this particular sentence, under the same subsection, " In this film, Stephan focuses on the representation of women, sexual politics and gender relations." might not sound as unbiased as Wikipedia asks for, and I would suggest to maybe write it in a more neutral way.

link to be for "war between Lebanon and Israel in the summer of 2006" as opposed to just war

Under the 'Lebanon/War' part of the Career subsection, I would perhaps put this entire sentence: "war between Lebanon and Israel in the summer of 2006" as a link, opposed to just the word 'war'.

Lastly, I would add as many links to other Wikipedia pages as possible to create more traffic for your article. For instance, I would links to all of the schools, cities, occupations, and school programs that you mentioned throughout the article.

Chloearielm (talk) 04:14, 17 March 2016 (UTC)