User talk:Sachifriendster

my fictional story -Murder Ground- Chapter 1 (The Mournful Hill) As I walked across the hill to reach the middle point of the so-called playground in the famous Parsville, the leaves of the trees were dried and falling and the sun seemed as if it was about to consume us in its sunlight. The cobbled rocks were distracting for me to keep on walking, but I did have my two friends ith me. They were Al and Rej,trodding with me. Al gasped and said, "How much longer?". I wanted to say "a few mins." but the truth was it was still a long way. Our legs got scratched by the twigs and every now and then we'd slip since the hill was so slanted. "We should just go back." Rej said. But,we all knew that we had a sence of adventure in us that we just coudn't turn back.

Chapter 2 (Concussion Board) We were exsausted but we finally reached it. The first attraction. The basket ball board. We wanted to shoot some hoops to take our minds of the scars on our legs.. But, we had no ball. "Why don't we use rocks instead?" Al suggested. I felt wierd about using rocks for basket ball but we had nothing else. I would shoot from afar for I thought it would be more challenging. Al was doing well so he tried to do a dunk. And, as he dunked the rock-- it hit his head. Though this may seem like a simple accident, Rej tried to shoot a few inches away and the rock bounced from the basket to his arm. We started to wonder.We decided to move on to the next attraction.

Chapter 3 (Dangerous Double Swing) Double Swing. That's what we called it. That swing that looks like it's a bench for two people and you just hung it on a pole. Well, it was VERY dangerous even though it seemed a harmless as some pie. The two boys sat and i pushed, it was tiring but fun pushing them. And, it was airy for them. But, then suddenly Al said "Can we stop? My stomach's growling.". We laughed. Al got off but Rej stayed so i kept pushing the swing and Al rested. Then,the bars holding the pole where the double swing was suddenly creaked and the bolts holding it got uprooted! We were shocked and Rej was obviously scared to get crushed by some swing! That certainly not how anyone would like to pass on. So, Rej and I ran to Al and watched the swaying double swing. Fortunately, the bolts werent unscrewed ALL the way, it was still slightly stuck on the ground. But,we werent taking any chances. As,we sighed in relief of surviving that incident. The sun still scorched and it felt like we were eggs on a pan just being sunny side up. We decided it was time to-once again-move on to the next attraction.

---to be continued (there are more chapters