User talk:Sadcadet/sandbox

Feedback
Link to second article is broken. These sources look reliable, but you may want to start with some basic textbooks or books for more of an overview. Michelev (talk) 17:22, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

Second draft feedback
Michelev (talk) 17:57, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Current Wikipedia article uses "oily water" not "oil water." If latter is correct, I recommend sticking with current wording and posting a comment on the article Talk page recommending a name change, with some reliable sources for evidence. If former is correct, draft needs editing on that term.
 * Draft (only counting new material) is less than 800 words. Regulation section could use more detail on MARPOL and IMO rules. Types section could use more detail - what microorganisms are used? What
 * Would also benefit from a photo or photos of this equipment - any on the TSGB you could photograph?
 * Diagram is faint - is it possible to get a better copy or re-draw it yourself (with credit to EPA)?
 * Writing needs editing for comma splices, missing commas, apostrophe errors, unnecessary capitalization.