User talk:Sadonahue/sandbox

Feedback by Michelle and Lolee
- More on personal life would be nice, for example when she was born and where she went to university and what her degree is.

-In early life and career, there is a discussion of a conflict but it is very unclear what the conflict it self is. Don't really understand the quote that was put after and how it relates to what you are trying to say.

-Separating career and early life would make the article more clear and easier to read and comprehend

-Accomplishments, awards and published work should be all one section

-Stronger sources could be used. The first source ( https://theconversation.com/profiles/kaye-wellings-110032 ) is Dr Wellings writing about herself. Confirm with the prof, but I don't think that is allowed.

-Second source has a lot of useful information you could add to her career and early life ( http://www.thelancet.com/journals/lancet/article/PIIS0140-6736(13)62346-6/fulltext ). There is also more accomplishments discussed in the source (for example, her fellowship with St Mary's Hospital Medical School)

-The third source just sends you to the Universities homepage. Not sure what you are citing from the website. ( https://www.lshtm.ac.uk/)

-In your 4th source, not really sure where you got the information you cited from the BBC article.

-Dr Wellings is not mentioned at all in the 7th source provided ( https://www.acss.org.uk/news/sixty-nine-leading-social-scientists-conferred-fellows-academy-social-sciences/)

-Maybe cite her two other published work