User talk:Safrye8/Difluoromethane

I have made some suggestions in the review sandbox for you. Overall great edits, my main suggestions are to work on wording a little more and your citations. Nstynka (talk) 13:58, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

I have started a peer review, but not finished. Amassey1 (talk) 14:29, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

I finished your peer review, finally. Amassey1 (talk) 03:34, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

George's comments
I think this is looking really good, it looks like you are removing the section written by the person who did the research. Since you give some safety data, it might be a good idea to give a link to an SDS sheet, maybe in a resources section. Here's an example: https://www.airgas.com/msds/001054.pdf

Some of the data you present needs to be framed. If you have a source for the quantity produced, make sure the year and the source is included. It seems some of that data comes from background information in reference 4.

Watch for qualifying terms - "lately", "recently", "fortunately"... adverbs bad! --Drglheard (talk) 14:24, 11 March 2021 (UTC)--