User talk:Sagemw/sandbox

Sage, You're off to an excellent start with your entry, and have done a particularly good job of adapting to Wikipedia conventions of writing tone and format. the sequence of info in the main descriptive paragraph warrants fine-tuning, for example, maybe the Crucifixion panel needs its own sentence and the two separate points about it can go together that way. Please touch base with any questions!
 * Your draft offers a clear, succinct overview. Here are a few aspects to consider as your revise:
 * this discussion of the panels might be a place that can get more detail. Right now you're at 226 words for the body, and the target is to craft 300-500 words or so (given the strength of your research that shouldn't be a problem to find more material to add)
 * the last paragraph (about size) is unclear. As part of the discussion of whether the doors were made for S Sabina or not, maybe include an estimated date of their carving?
 * don't forget to add 1-2 images, I see the general S Sabina entry already has one of the Crucifixion tho

AMcClanan (talk) 19:12, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Sage, your writing is clear and concise, and you did an excellent job organizing it. Your post felt a little short, and since you have four sources I wonder what else there is to know about the doors. I think seeing images of them would be very helpful in understanding the scenes they are about. I also felt likeyour last point about the doors being made smaller was left short! That was a new point you made, that I am very interested in, and I would love to know more!! Nice job on research! Saranewcom (talk) 02:50, 29 November 2018 (UTC)