User talk:Sagew/sandbox

Group Assignment
For this group assignment, we will be working on editing the page on the topic of New Girl( Tv series). --Sagew (talk) 21:07, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Topic Discussion
1.Michael Kors--Sagew (talk) 21:08, 24 March 2012 (UTC) I have been looking into MK as the topic, what I found is similar content to MK page on wiki. 1.In order to edit it, we can add things like ,his personal life (Concern over this is that the source is based on stories, or gossips, not sure if it is reliable). 2.We can talk about his role as a judge on" project runway" Tv show. 3. Meanwhile, we can include his contribution to the fashion industry, and his role as a benefactor and the overall brand history. Pros and cons: 1.Concern is that the sources might not be reliable if the majority we depend on are all taken from Internet. ( Note, most of the celebrities resources are taken out of contents, or even gossips.) 2.And there is a possibility that wiki takes down the page or partial contents if the source is not trustworthy. 3. Good thing about this article is that Wiki clearly indicates the necessaries of adding extra information.

2. New Girl--Sagew (talk) 21:08, 24 March 2012 (UTC) Considering New Girl as of the topic, the following contents should be addressed and added to the wiki page: 1.There are no summaries for each episodes. Since there are 17 episodes in total so far, the main task will consist of summarizing episodes for this section. 2.We can also link more information to the production section, things like the original ideas, the team behind it, the purpose of the show. 3.The general summary for the show is brief. 4.For the cast section, it is necessary to work on adding more attributes to the main cast members. 5.In the end, it is necessary to inscribe peer reviews and critics related to the show. Pros and cons: 1. In terms of looking for reliable sources, the storyline of each episodes are what we mainly based on. 2. Be aware to be subjective.All edits should be based on the show without personal reviews.

Group Talk(General)
I will take care of the first 8 episode summaries and the character descriptions for Jess and Nick.--Sndradee (talk) 18:59, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Here is the official website for the New Girl TV Series: http://www.fox.com/new-girl/bios/zooey-deschanel. I will work on the summaries as well as the character descriptions with Mary. --Sndradee (talk) 18:51, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

I will take care of the episodes 9 to 17 summaries, and I will take care of the character descriptions for Max Greenfield as Schmidt, and Lamorne Morris as Winston Bishop.--MarydelaRosa (talk) 21:19, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

I will be doing the critics and production part, including original ideas, the team behind it, and more. --CHU.ROSE (talk) 11:16, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Hello again ladies,

I finished all my posts for the Wikipedia page. Feel free to look them over and provide me with constructive criticism! I will be making one more post regarding my editing process (how I edited the sections that I was in charge of, what I changed and what I added). Good luck with your sections! --Sndradee (talk) 23:17, 27 March 2012 (UTC)

I've posted everything in the sandbox, I added more information to the production section, expanded more details to the original page, and I've also found some critics focusing on the show's plot generally. please double check it for me, and tell me any mistake I made, so I can make the changes ASAP, also please help me check and edit my grammar, they are horrible! thanks, much appreciated! :) --CHU.ROSE (talk) 15:55, 28 March 2012 (UTC)