User talk:Sago1031/sandbox

Peer Review
I completed the peer review but I believe this was really great! It is very neutral. It is a good foundation for issues that develop out of human rights in Ethiopia. I would make sure to add some specific evidence with different ethnic groups but overall it was great! donkask

Peer Review
I think the History section is really fleshed out and comes from a neutral standpoint. It was easy to read through the details that I assume would serve as a base for the discussion about the development of Human Rights in Ethiopia. Sleuthsr21 (talk) 22:20, 6 November 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think that overall this piece is coming together nicely. I believe if possible it might be beneficial to split up the history section into a few parts to make the flow a little easier. I also believe that the last section could use a little bit more substance beyond just a definition. However, I think this piece is coming together quite nicely and should lay the groundwork properly for a quality discussion on rights - a topic that greatly needs talking about with Ethiopia on the brink of Civil War. talk:Newyou2020|talk]])14:06, 13 November 2020(UTC)