User talk:Sagorika89

nice to meet you!Qianqianxgz (talk) 16:40, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

Namaste
Sup, boo? Wiki is fun!(Wikisyzygy (talk) 16:44, 25 September 2012 (UTC))

Welcome to Wikipedia: check out the Teahouse!
I, and the rest of the hosts, would be more than happy to answer any questions you have! SarahStierch (talk) 04:24, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

peer review
Sagorika, great job!!! I like the clean style of your page and the sections are very well-organized. I think it would be better and clearer if you can lay out the main idea or some bullet points in the first section (theory part) and the example part. Also, the internal links seem a little less there. You could consider add more links to other page.

Ailin7 (talk) 19:40, 12 November 2012 (UTC)

Great job on this article! There is a lot of really good, substantive research and examples. As far as suggestions, perhaps some images or diagrams could help break up the text to help with readability. Ailin's idea of bullets may also be a solution. The two sentences of the "Examples" section seem like they could use another look regarding editing. There seems to be a good number of citations, so great job on that! Perhaps one other thing to consider as you finalize it would be some additional internals links. Great job and it was very interesting to read!

Yobi831 (talk) 04:42, 13 November 2012 (UTC)