User talk:Salbiondo8

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Hello, Salbiondo8, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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A kitten for you!
I really like how your start your paragraph by telling Ai story from the begging. However i think it would beneficial if you introduced who she was before the start of your paragraph.

Madisondaoust (talk) 03:45, 5 March 2020 (UTC) 