User talk:Saldri3/sandbox

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Your article is really great. The order of your paragraphs flow very well and you do not wander off topic at all. I honestly see no errors in your work as it is structured and organized very well. You do a very good job at remaining neutral throughout your work and keep a very general perspective. Everything is very precise and to the point, which makes your work very interesting and easy to read. I know you had trouble finding reliable sources for your work, but just make sure to try and get some for the final draft. Even if they are not scholarly articles, try and incorporate different references in your work that way you aren’t just relying on the two sources you have. You chose really good internal sources because they give a lot of insight into what you’re writing about. Your external link for Elektra (comics) was very useful and informative, however, I was not able to pull up the external link for pin up art. I’m not sure if it is just my computer, but just make sure to double check that link. Overall, you did a really good job. The article does a really good job at being precise and informative. I don’t see anything that really needs to be changed in your article, but if you had to chose one thing to improve your article, I would say add more sources.

Jromai3 (talk) 13:19, 17 March 2016 (UTC)