User talk:Salt addict/sandbox

Looks like a good start, and I'm pleased to see that you're getting familiar with the Wiki format. I'm a little concerned about the Berry and Berry introduction. It reads a little more like an essay (like for a traditional paper) than an encyclopedia entry. I'd recommending just beginning with the felon disenfranchisement discussion. Happy to talk more on Tuesday.Derosadual (talk) 16:24, 18 February 2013 (UTC)