User talk:SaltyRiver

Proposed Change
I would like to change/edit a few things in the article on Eolo Car. I intend to add sources to help back up claims, in particular the section on how it works using compressed air/air expansion. SaltyRiver (talk) 12:43, 26 March 2020 (UTC)

proposal feedback
Thanks for sharing your proposal. Your plan seems sound. That article could really use an infobox, too, if you want to work on that instead. For something like that, I suggest using other, more developed articles as a model, like the Ford Mustang. If you're going to use images, consult WikiEdu's training first.

Please let me know if you need any help evaluating sources or working with the Wikipedia formatting. -KS (DeerJerky (talk) 21:39, 26 March 2020 (UTC)

Reflection: I changed some of the wording and added more information to the "How it Works" section. I added information about the Compressed Air Engine (CAE), which it previously did not mention, and changed the refill time from six to two hours. I also added a source to support the information. One of the things I found most difficult about this assignment was finding information about this particular car. I wanted to add an infobox, but I was unable to find enough information. I could not find any sources or images outside of Wikipedia of the Eolo Car. This assignment taught me how necessary it is to cite sources on Wikipedia, because sometimes there is not enough information to go off of to improve an article.SaltyRiver (talk) 20:50, 27 March 2020 (UTC)