User talk:Saltysquid223/Deviant. The Possession of Christian Shaw


 * you have an outline. i would move the two critiques into the critique section, with a reference for each one. use citation generator (the " on the toolbar) after each statement.
 * summarize the content from your urls, and then add the url as a reference, using citation generator.
 * your "Links to add", you could list in a "See also" section.
 * here are more references

--Sitesimu (talk) 17:15, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
 * https://elmcip.net/creative-work/califia
 * https://collection.eliterature.org/1/works/leishman__deviant_the_possession_of_christian_shaw.html
 * https://donnaleishman.weebly.com/deviant-the-possession-of-christian-shaw.html
 * https://elitandmonstrousfeminine.wordpress.com/portfolio/deviant-the-possession-of-christian-shaw/ (wordpress a little bloggy)
 * https://iloveepoetry.org/?p=6649
 * https://cellproject.net/creative-work/deviant-possession-christian-shaw-5