User talk:SamLovesScience/Amoeboid movement/Kyguy22 Peer Review

I am greatly impressed with what you have included. The organization of it is very clear. I see that you will be adding in another section that is labeled “Types of amoeboid motion”. I also do believe that it is in appropriate spot being before the “Molecular mechanism of cell motion” section. As I was reading the information that you will be including it is clear and simple. I could read it and understand what is being spoken about.

The only thing that I found a little bit off is one sentence in the Crawling subsection. It is the sentence that says “Crawling, though, isn't notably slower on uneven and irregular surfaces, while gliding gets much slower under these more difficult movement conditions.” This is wonderful information however, I feel like the last part of the sentence should not be included in this section but would be more appropriate in the gliding section. I know it is nitpicky, but that is something you could look into.

It is well done and I enjoyed reading what you have included. Thank you for your work and your future contribution to this article.

--Kyguy22 (talk) 02:54, 1 December 2021 (UTC)