User talk:Samartin1024/sandbox

This looks like a good approach, StephanieCarolyncunningham (talk) 21:23, 18 September 2018 (UTC)Carolyncunningham

Feedback

Is your content meant to go in the introduction section? I am unsure what you plan to replace or where you want to add your content. I think your source is very good. My feedback would be to explain where you want this content to go. It is not clear right now. But the content itself is good. Clear, neutral and cited.

Tedfdahlstrom (talk) 21:25, 28 September 2018 (UTC)Ted

Response
Ted,

Yes I would like to replace the bulk of the introduction. The last sentence of the existing introduction is something, helpful, that I do not have. Samartin1024 (talk) 23:21, 2 October 2018 (UTC)Stephanie