User talk:Samf1998

Welcome!
Hello, Samf1998, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback request
I got your message and took a look at your sandboxox. You're off to a good start, but there are some things that need fixing
 * Your sources include URLs that go through your library's proxy server; things like search.proquest.com.ezproxy.fiu.edu are only accessible to people who are logged in to your university's system. For everyone else, they are inaccessible and likely to be uninterpretable. Please use things like DOIs, if they are available.
 * You are using a mixed reference system - both things like (Author, date) and inline citations. Please stick with inline citations - they are easier to maintain and more standard for Wikipedia articles.
 * Section headers use sentence capitalization, not title capitalization. Only the first word should be capitalized. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:43, 18 October 2016 (UTC)