User talk:Samf1998/sandbox

Prof Garcia's Comments
Week 6: Hi Sam: I see the edits you have added to the talk page of your article topic, keep reading your sources and making notes on what you will use for your full article. It's important that you put quotes, paraphrases, and other details that you will include in your final article. But make sure to cite them all so you don't forget you got that information from! Alfgarciamora (talk) 12:04, 12 October 2016 (UTC)

Excellent job, Samantha! You're building up your page so well. =) Keep up the great work, and make sure you add more content to the mainspace so that you can really round out your page. Make sure to structure your page like other successful Wikipedia pages. You can just take a look at other Wikipedia pages and see what makes them "good." Alfgarciamora (talk) 19:02, 4 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer review
You could differentiate between blue and white collar workers. There you could discuss the different social etiquette each has to follow when they interact with each other dress code, communication, behavior, etc. Maybe add a section about customer interactions. You could also add what qualifies as improper etiquette and how that affects the work place. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dominiquejrivera (talk • contribs) 20:06, 18 October 2016 (UTC)