User talk:Samia ah/sandbox

review for draft
Hello! I've taken a look at your draft and I have a few comments: You can ask me questions about these at any point and I'll be happy to help. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:04, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
 * At some points the article verges into a guide (e.g. the section on "Fuel your body"). We can certainly link to guides like the FDA's recommendations but we're fundamentally a different kind of resource. An article like this could focus on the research into the health benefits (as it is a bit of an old saw, there are some attempts to falisfy it in the literature).
 * the first section does not need the header (as the article title will be shown prominently at the top).
 * Breaking down the benefits of specific food groups also kinda falls under a writing a guide, so it's hard to bring this into the format.