User talk:Samirayasmeen.1/sandbox

Feedback: Your comments on the talk page are relevant and potentially helpful to the page should they become page content. It is not clear to me that you are viewing aggression through a strictly evolutionary lens, which is what we are doing in this class. For example, you ask whether fish aggression can be treated, indicating it is a problem. It is most likely a very important adaptation for fish living in social groups.

Your addition to the main page opens up the possibility of future additions and introduces evolutionary theory. It does not read very well with the rest of the page, so try to make sure to integrate it better in the future given other page content.

Mholding70 (talk) 19:20, 17 October 2014 (UTC)