User talk:Sammccauley3/sandbox

Jake's Peer Review
Overall good information. The easiest way to cite is to use the citation generator on the actual sandbox page. This will take care of your citations in text as well with the numbering system used by wikipedia. In terms of the information in the sandbox, it is all good reliable sources and neutral tone. The bibliography section will add a wonderful part to the article. Overall the edit looks good. The biggest fix I can see would be the citations but that's and easy fix. Good work.