User talk:Sammyd840/sandbox

Your article so far is good and there are many good points made. Also, there are a lot of useful facts and information that you found for your language and I am impressed with your fact finding skills. Chol seems like and interesting language. However there were some grammatical and sentence structure errors here and there. I fixed some grammatical errors, and sentencing structures. Also, I changed the references and put them under a new references tab and changed your references tab to a bibliography section. John Goula jwg92